Copper Town (Original)

Yuping:Oh..Ummm..Yeah..He's right over there....*Points at himself*


Im Yuping.Whaddya want?

Osamu: Name's Osamu. And this is my partner Namito.

Namito: Salutations. We was expecting your existance. And we may be need of your help.

Yuping:Whats in it for me?

Osamu: We're not done talking about it. The point is that some criminal mastermind is about to hypnotize the people and take over the world. His name is Dr. Twist, the hypnotist.

Yuping:Hmm..Let me think about it.....

Umm..How long will this mission take?

Namito: Well... that depends. If you succeed the mission, we'll try to give you a surprise.

Yuping:I'LL DO IT!*Gives Namito a high five*

Villager: Does anyone realize that there's been a fire for at least 2 pages, now?

Yuping:Let us leave!


OOC:No..There is no fire

OOC:

Zecronno wrote:

*Rayman appears, sets the town on fire, then flees the topic*

That fire was never put out. >.>

OOC:No one cares about your fire


IC:

Yuping:Im going to go now to do this mission *Leaves topic*

OOC: =O

Well, excuuuusssee me, Princess!

Namito: Dr. Twist was last seen in Texas. You must infiltrate and defeat him. Just stay away from the hypnotic spells.

Osamu: He has been gone for awhile.

Namito: Yes. Where is he anyway?

Benika: I think I'm beginning to worry about Yuping-Kun.

Kunari: Yeah, Benika, why is he late?!

*Yuping enters*

Yuping:Guahahaha!I crave the power!!I need the power!Gruaahaha!!


*Yuping takes out the wand of dark and the wand of fire and shoots a darkfire orb at the place Benika is at*


Yuping:Nyahaha!!

*Benika's face turned red as she is filling up her rage*

Benika: YUPING!! I AM GOING TO KILL YOU FOR THAT!!!

Osamu: Yuping, whatever you're doing, stop this!

Yuping:No way!I have never felt such a large desire for power!Im keeping theese!!Hahaha!!

I need blood!

*Yuping takes out fire and ice/water wands and creates a rain of fire down on Osamu and Benika.Blood spills from their bodies and Yuping collects their blood*

Yuping:Im not under control!See ya!*Leaves topic*

OOC: QUIT. IT. WITH. THE. BLOOD. This is an all-age forum, and it could scare someone (Like me, which it is.). >.>

Kunari: BENIKA!!

Benika: *exausted due to HP loss* Pant.. pant... pant....

Osamu: Yuping betrayed us!! *loses conciousness* Gah...

Namito: Osamu?! Stay with us, you're gonna be ok...

Osamu: Take me... to the nearest hospital...

Benika: That's it, I'm breaking up with him.

Akira: It's not just that. Yuping is mad with power!

Benika: We gotta find Alice before Yuping will make her the next target!!! *leaves with Akira and Kunari*

Osamu: Please.... be careful....

Darkrai Koopa wrote:

OOC: QUIT. IT. WITH. THE. BLOOD. This is an all-age forum, and it could scare someone (Like me, which it is.). >.>

OOC:
Listen.Its a PG forum(According to the ad Karasz made and looking at the topics it is).13.So i dont really care.Because Yupings goals is to collect blood.And you dont need to visualise the blood and stuff..Just..Read it and dont imagine it. Live with it. And blood is cool.I do not wish to start a flame war.So please do not reply to this since you would likely start one. And i once heard in my school that women are less afraid of blood.Might not be true but im just making a point. Frankly.I dont really care.Siince im not breaking any rules. See ya!

IC:


*A bunch of coinstelahs enter copper town*

Coinstelahs:Let me see.....Ah..Yes...Coins!*Starts sucking up cash wildly*

Yuping wrote:

Darkrai Koopa wrote:

OOC: QUIT. IT. WITH. THE. BLOOD. This is an all-age forum, and it could scare someone (Like me, which it is.). >.>

OOC:
Listen.Its a PG forum (According to the ad Karasz made and looking at the topics it is).13. So I don't really care.Because Yuping's goals is to collect blood. And you don't need to visualize the blood and stuff..Just..Read it and don't imagine it. Live with it. And blood is cool. I do not wish to start a flame war. So please do not reply to this since you would likely start one. And I once heard in my school that women are less afraid of blood. Might not be true but I'm just making a point. Frankly.I don't really care. Since I'm not breaking any rules. See ya!

Yes, but blood isn't something for 10-year old kids to know about. About the visualizing thing, you should be talking, since you get "trapped in fantasy". Blood is not cool because it isn't cool when a 10-year old sees it in writing. Alright, I read Harry Potter books. Before you say "OMG DERES BLOD IN DAT BOK SEREZ!!1", that's the only part I don't like. I don't visualize it. It just scares the daylight out of me, even when I DON'T visualize it. You're not making a point, you're just trying to get away with posting mature content. Yes, blood is immature content. Did you see blood in PG movies? Blood is AT LEAST PG-13. And also, I read Harry Potter just because it's fun, hilarious and ALL AGE. Sure. There's blood in it. Is there shooting? Or SEARCHING for blood (Except in the 4th books, which is only about 2 paragraphs)? No. THAT'S why it's all age. blood because of a cut is all age. Hordes of blood is mature related. And just because you don't care doesn't mean I don't. I am younger than you, and younger kids are more likely to get scared, like I said before, THIS IS AN ALL AGE FORUM. Just because you're 13-20 doesn't mean there are kids younger than you. Just think about others who ARE younger than you. You go to a school where kids are your age. I don't go to your school (Timezones ZOMG) Oh, and you ARE breaking a rule. NO MATURE CONTENT. Let me show you some things of mature content (Karasz, you might want to use this for reference.) :

Shooting
Hordes of blood
Cutting someone open
Bombs
Guns
SEX, RAPING, AND EVERYTHING ELSE RELATED TO THE PRIVATE PARTS
Aaand dying of a painful, bloody death. (Dying is ok. BLOODY dying isn't.) :]

Oh, one more thing... Please try to put an effort into your posts. Such as good grammar, spelling and punctuation. I edited your post to good grammar/spelling this time.

Edit: Do I win the longest rant/persuasive letter on this forum?

OOC: Whoa, calm down! We know, we know, but can't you pretend that their HP is drained, or maybe they were defeated instead of dying literatly? And please we don't want any flaming...

OOC: Yes. Try to calm your temper. But I still support my long rant. Also, you still might want to use that list.

Darkrai Koopa wrote:

Yuping wrote:

Darkrai Koopa wrote:

OOC: QUIT. IT. WITH. THE. BLOOD. This is an all-age forum, and it could scare someone (Like me, which it is.). >.>

OOC:
Listen.Its a PG forum (According to the ad Karasz made and looking at the topics it is).13. So I don't really care.Because Yuping's goals is to collect blood. And you don't need to visualize the blood and stuff..Just..Read it and don't imagine it. Live with it. And blood is cool. I do not wish to start a flame war. So please do not reply to this since you would likely start one. And I once heard in my school that women are less afraid of blood. Might not be true but I'm just making a point. Frankly.I don't really care. Since I'm not breaking any rules. See ya!

Yes, but blood isn't something for 10-year old kids to know about. About the visualizing thing, you should be talking, since you get "trapped in fantasy". Blood is not cool because it isn't cool when a 10-year old sees it in writing. Alright, I read Harry Potter books. Before you say "OMG DERES BLOD IN DAT BOK SEREZ!!1", that's the only part I don't like. I don't visualize it. It just scares the daylight out of me, even when I DON'T visualize it. You're not making a point, you're just trying to get away with posting mature content. Yes, blood is immature content. Did you see blood in PG movies? Blood is AT LEAST PG-13. And also, I read Harry Potter just because it's fun, hilarious and ALL AGE. Sure. There's blood in it. Is there shooting? Or SEARCHING for blood (Except in the 4th books, which is only about 2 paragraphs)? No. THAT'S why it's all age. blood because of a cut is all age. Hordes of blood is mature related. And just because you don't care doesn't mean I don't. I am younger than you, and younger kids are more likely to get scared, like I said before, THIS IS AN ALL AGE FORUM. Just because you're 13-20 doesn't mean there are kids younger than you. Just think about others who ARE younger than you. You go to a school where kids are your age. I don't go to your school (Timezones ZOMG) Oh, and you ARE breaking a rule. NO MATURE CONTENT. Let me show you some things of mature content (Karasz, you might want to use this for reference.) :

Shooting
Hordes of blood
Cutting someone open
Bombs
Guns
SEX, RAPING, AND EVERYTHING ELSE RELATED TO THE PRIVATE PARTS
Aaand dying of a painful, bloody death. (Dying is ok. BLOODY dying isn't.) :]

Oh, one more thing... Please try to put an effort into your posts. Such as good grammar, spelling and punctuation. I edited your post to good grammar/spelling this time.

Edit: Do I win the longest rant/persuasive letter on this forum?

First:I have no idea what you are talking about "Trapped in fantasy"
Second:I cannot help it. Like..The only thing on that list i can avoid is SEX, RAPING, AND EVERYTHING ELSE RELATED TO THE PRIVATE PARTS.

Since most of my characters use gun related weapons and Landon is a fricken doctor.
So im sorry i cannot stay away from thoose things. Too bad.

OOC: *Robotnik's Voice and punches both Darkrai and Yuping* SILENCE!!!